As I rounded the corner I spotted the girl I had just met leaning over the wall with a camera in her hand. She was concentrating hard on the small digital screen and was oblivious to everything going on around her. The viewing balcony was quiet, but there was still little space at the walls edge itself. I stood for a moment watching her, stalking her from a distance. I couldn't decide whether to approach her again or make may way past her and onto the next section to look at the views to the north of the city. I made the decision that was acting in both of our best interests, obviously.
I walked cautiously up behind Stephanie and strained my neck into the bend between her shoulder and neck. “Whatcha’ doing?” I whispered.
“HOLY SHIT!” She recoiled with a start. “What the hell do you think you are doing sneaking up on me?” She glared over at me.
“Whoa, sorry mate. I diddn’t mean to scare you.” I apologised.
“Jesus, I don’t know what is normal on the other side of the
I instinctively began following her through the door. I could see that she was not at all happy with me but for some reason this intrigued me, it was not the first time. I had once found myself being chased through the streets of
“You know you’re kind of rude.” I observed with a smile.
“Yeah, well you’re kind of creepy.” She replied, pressing the elevator button.
I stepped back and took a deep breath, this one was tricky. “You know, I think we have got off on the wrong foot, don’t you? Why don’t I buy you lunch, I know this great place over looking the park.”
“How about you don’t.” She snarled back at me. She glared into my eyes as the elevator door binged closed.
That was it, I had blown it with quite possibly the most beautiful girl I had ever come across, I had no luck in love. I went back outside and stood for another few minutes looking out across the city. I couldn’t find any inspiration, my mind was too distracted with images of Stephanie, and the inevitable regret that I hadn’t played it cooler and at least got her number.
After picking up a burger and some fries, I made it back to the office within the hour. I walked across the lobby to the elevator. Pressing the button for the 50th floor I took the final sip of my orange soda.
“Venereologist!” Mike shouted over to me as I approached our office.
“What?” I asked, a confused look on my face.
“The medical title for a penis doctor is Venereologist. I found it on Wikipedia mate.”
“Time well spent while I have been gone then Mike, as usual.” I smiled.
11 comments:
wow, nice story,
thanks for the comment!
ur blog is pretty amazing!
-alexis
i like the story alot, it seems like it's getting better each installment. this guy must be having a shitty day! i like how the end of this one brings it back around to the whole joke about the penis doctor. is that a reoccurring theme? haha it's really funny. i like how you add realism to the character by bringing up his past with the girl with the muhammad ali impersonator, hilarious! i can't wait for the next one!
Wow! Nice story!
Thx for commenting!
No, I wish they were playing over here.
I LUV them!!
Which one do u like the best?
-Clarie
great addition. Where did Penis Doctor come from and who are your characters? Based on life events or purely fictional?
im lovin it!!!it has to be said you have sucha a talent you shud really consider become a wirter as a side line thing you never kno!!!
so far im completly lost in the story and i can't wait for the next part im dying to read i wonder does he ever get to see stephanie again hehe!!!
ps. wasn't i promised a link lol
neat story!yeah the uk sounds cool and it's really hot here in louisiana!thanx for the comment:]
talk to ya lata!
xoxo-Savana
=] yes yes yes! x
Letting everyone guess what next, I like the way you write in intallments. If you have visited my blog you will see i am inspired by your way in story telling. And the way you used the "*****" for medical term is couragenous on your part, coz i cant. It's koool man! I am waiting for the next section. I dont know about UK or other side of Atlantic, but I am sure had it been India, Stephanie would have not only slapped but god knows.....what else..(lol)
You're a really good writer. I'll be checking back for the next installment. Thanks for commenting on my blog too, everyone likes to know that someone is actually reading this shit.
cheers
-Joe
Funny story and so well written! I love it =) Visit my site if you can:
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-Mila
HA!! LOVED the ending of this one! I was reading it to my daughter, she enjoyed it too (it's ok, she's 18). I especially liked the way you had my hopes up for the character with Steph, but then dropped them in the dirt when she rejected him, but then had me laughing with the venereologist line from Mike and your character's retort back at him! (You Brits have such a wit) That's what I enjoy, a twist and a pull, and then a good laugh! Emotion-evoking, very good!
Leslie
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